TP - I think you accomplished what you wanted with

TP - I think you accomplished what you wanted with this article.  I like your choice to use the war/battlefield analogy in your write up because A) It is actually a good way to describe it, and B) It is an argument that [sadly] our general population can grasp and digest.  If you were to have used the more technical description of activation earlier in the article, rather than grabbing the audiences attention with that more exciting analogy, I would bet many readers would not bother to get through the whole write up.  Good job. 

I must also say, that even though I'm already on the edge of my seat in anticipation of what the near future holds, I think your article pushed me even closer to falling out of my chair!  As you said it didnt provide any info us longs dodnt already know, but reading that summary still makes my excitement grow even more!  Cheers to you.