Posted On: 09/17/2014 9:18:11 AM
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Thanks for posting the link - I just finished reading it.
To Desmond's credit, he has done a lot to gather and review press releases, obtain TA details and put pieces together to offer his perspective on the industry and in particular FITX. I applaud him for his efforts and his stance to put his work out there against the negative opinions and slanderous statements that have surrounded this company. He has done far more to positively influence others than I or many of us here collectively have done.
What I do want him to be conscious of, though, is falling into the trap of writing cheerleader pieces where his opinions outweigh the facts that he is trying to convey. His constant use of hyperbole and superlatives are beginning to grow a bit tiresome at this point. I think he can deliver the same message to his audience without using colorful language to gain attention.
I hope that Desmond takes this as constructive criticism and recognizes that his efforts are certainly appreciated by shareholders.
Regards,
-kbulldog.
Thanks for posting the link - I just finished reading it.
To Desmond's credit, he has done a lot to gather and review press releases, obtain TA details and put pieces together to offer his perspective on the industry and in particular FITX. I applaud him for his efforts and his stance to put his work out there against the negative opinions and slanderous statements that have surrounded this company. He has done far more to positively influence others than I or many of us here collectively have done.
What I do want him to be conscious of, though, is falling into the trap of writing cheerleader pieces where his opinions outweigh the facts that he is trying to convey. His constant use of hyperbole and superlatives are beginning to grow a bit tiresome at this point. I think he can deliver the same message to his audience without using colorful language to gain attention.
I hope that Desmond takes this as constructive criticism and recognizes that his efforts are certainly appreciated by shareholders.
Regards,
-kbulldog.
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