Trying to type gently-- CYnDY: Honey, does this
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Posted On: 12/21/2021 8:50:53 PM
Trying to type gently--
CYnDY: Honey, does this word salad PR bullet point make me seem cheap? "CD20 is allowed to have four dosages of leronlimab in the first four weeks via IV infusion"
Me: What? Why no, babe, you know you're my triple digit goddess, no matter what you're wearing!
But sweetie, maybe try:
A. "Patients in the CD20 treatment arm will receive IV leronlimab once per week for four weeks." OR:
B. "The CD20 treatment arm will add four doses of once weekly IV leronlimab to the standard of care."
Showing my work:
1. "CD20 is allowed..." What? Why type that? Harkens back to the FDA arm-wrestling times.
2. "dosages" -- Just stick with dose. Dosage refers to strength, like 350 mg, 525 mg, 700 mg.
3. "four dosages of leronlimab in the first four weeks via IV infusion" Fixed as above in A or B.
Cue my clumsy, amateurish handoff to skilled screenwriters/editors to add plotlines and onscreen tension.
CYnDY: Honey, does this word salad PR bullet point make me seem cheap? "CD20 is allowed to have four dosages of leronlimab in the first four weeks via IV infusion"
Me: What? Why no, babe, you know you're my triple digit goddess, no matter what you're wearing!
But sweetie, maybe try:
A. "Patients in the CD20 treatment arm will receive IV leronlimab once per week for four weeks." OR:
B. "The CD20 treatment arm will add four doses of once weekly IV leronlimab to the standard of care."
Showing my work:
1. "CD20 is allowed..." What? Why type that? Harkens back to the FDA arm-wrestling times.
2. "dosages" -- Just stick with dose. Dosage refers to strength, like 350 mg, 525 mg, 700 mg.
3. "four dosages of leronlimab in the first four weeks via IV infusion" Fixed as above in A or B.
Cue my clumsy, amateurish handoff to skilled screenwriters/editors to add plotlines and onscreen tension.
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