I would say that there's an awful lot of stuff on that one page, and I don't know that everyone will keep scrolling all the way to the bottom.
Also I would say the second part, after the picture of the couch and spotlight, seems to have an awful lot crammed into it, or at least the left part with the dashed boxes and arrows, doesn't seem to convey much info. To me that looks odd and confusing, I'm not sure what it's trying to say. After that it is all right until again near the end there's some diagram with dashed boxes and arrows. They need to get rid of those dashed boxes and arrows as I don't know what they are trying to represent. Maybe then it will all be ok, but there does seem to be a lot of "sections" as you scroll down and maybe too much info on one page.
I suspect though they must be working on a new website given the merger with Sound Concepts, so all this may be a moot point. But right now that page has maybe too much all one one page, and if no other redesign is being done (which I would guess there is) somehow those sections need to be categorized and made into several pages perhaps. Again, I don't know what those dashed boxes and arrows are supposed to convey, at first glance the engineer in me wants to think it is some kind of flow diagram. I don't know what the average person might think of it, but it doesn't help them understand the product.
What you propose certainly is much more concise and cleaner.
Also I would say the second part, after the picture of the couch and spotlight, seems to have an awful lot crammed into it, or at least the left part with the dashed boxes and arrows, doesn't seem to convey much info. To me that looks odd and confusing, I'm not sure what it's trying to say. After that it is all right until again near the end there's some diagram with dashed boxes and arrows. They need to get rid of those dashed boxes and arrows as I don't know what they are trying to represent. Maybe then it will all be ok, but there does seem to be a lot of "sections" as you scroll down and maybe too much info on one page.
I suspect though they must be working on a new website given the merger with Sound Concepts, so all this may be a moot point. But right now that page has maybe too much all one one page, and if no other redesign is being done (which I would guess there is) somehow those sections need to be categorized and made into several pages perhaps. Again, I don't know what those dashed boxes and arrows are supposed to convey, at first glance the engineer in me wants to think it is some kind of flow diagram. I don't know what the average person might think of it, but it doesn't help them understand the product.
What you propose certainly is much more concise and cleaner.
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