No, this is the point. You make a big deal abou
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You make a big deal about the SEC not being involved with the CRGP case, and then bring up the fact the SEC prosecuted violators of...something...related to bluesheet data and unsettled brokerage accounts , which you brought up without discussing how it related to your first point.
You're all over the place. Focus, and make a point. Assume your reader doesn't know what you're trying to say already.