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Posted On: 02/03/2021 6:06:19 PM
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Re: chazzledazzle #76099
CGC,
Actually I’d clean up the following passage a bit more - I’m still in the editing stage.
“Remember that old saying ‘Up the creek, without a paddle? Well, the Immune System is the creek. And Leronlimab is the paddle, and the canoe that will stop you from drowning in the Torrent.”
I would change this to...
“Remember that old saying ‘Up the creek , without a paddle?’ Well, the Immune System is the creek, and Leronlimab is the Canoe.”
Full stop.
Actually I’d clean up the following passage a bit more - I’m still in the editing stage.
“Remember that old saying ‘Up the creek, without a paddle? Well, the Immune System is the creek. And Leronlimab is the paddle, and the canoe that will stop you from drowning in the Torrent.”
I would change this to...
“Remember that old saying ‘Up the creek , without a paddle?’ Well, the Immune System is the creek, and Leronlimab is the Canoe.”
Full stop.
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